100 word challenge
One sunny day a young girl named Sam decided to go to the
beach! Sam decided to run all the way down to the beach. When she arrived she
was out of breath and sat down on the shore. Then out of the blue a huge whale
showed up on the beach! Sam jumped to her feet and sprinted even faster back to
her house. She flung the door open! She got her mom and dad. All three of them
raced all the way back down to the beach! After pushing and dragging the family
finally got the whale back in to the water!
It is good but you may need some more punctuation in it though.
ReplyDeleteThis is very interesting.
ReplyDeleteFunny!!!!
ReplyDeletewhere do you think there needs to me punctuation?
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