Monday, 11 March 2013

100 word challenge week #23


This week is a new 100 word challenge! The word prompt for the week was bath, mysterious, orange, cat, and separated! Please leave comments and tell me what you think! 


Two mysterious cats crept through a dark alleyway.  Crash! Bang! Boom!  Both cats jumped and ran! But they got separated when a dark figure with a net started to close in! It was animal control! I leaped up and ran after the second cat. As I turned the corner I saw the tail of a small orange cat. I sprinted as fast as I could! I reached out for the cat but I stumbled! I grabbed the cat as I fell!
                “OUCH!” I yelped! Slowly I got up with the cat still in my arms,
                 “Time to take you home for a nice bubble bath.” 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Ferron,

    This was a great entry - well done! Lots of action and some good choice of vocabulary.

    Keep entering the 100 Word Challenge and I hope to read more of your work soon.

    Liz Goddard
    Team 100 Word Challenge

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  2. Well done, Ferron! I am excited to see you enjoying writing!

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  3. Great story Ferron I loved it :P

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