This is my 100 word challenge for the week! i hope you enjoy!
I stepped outside, the cold air bit at my skin. The green shoots could just be seen through the old crinkled leaves. As I walked across our front lawn I could hear the leaves crunching under my bare feet. Once I reached the trees I started to sprint ducking under trees and weaving a path through the uneven ground. I came up to a barbwire fence I came to a stop and started to crawl under it but my sweater got caught, I pulled it ripped. I got up I jogged all the way down to the river and jumped in the cold water rushed around me.
Hi Ferron, this is a piece of super writing. I love your choice of words, 'old crinkled leaves'. I wonder what they were running away from? Perhaps you could continue the story.
ReplyDeleteMrs Fairburn (Team 100WC)